KidzSearch Encyclopedia:Peer review/Archive 2

Mayak accident

Quickly wrote a stub abput it. Needs polishing; so do related articles. --Eptalon 21:52, 15 October 2007 (UTC)

Considering en wiki has a great article, compared to us, it would be nice if someone could improve it. (I've got to go to a 80's themed B/Day in 6 days, and ive been told to read up on the 80's) -- Spiderpig0001 Does whatever a spiderpig does! 23:13, 13 October 2007 (UTC)

Neptune (planet)

I've contributed on a major part to the article, but it seems to have a lot of red links which seems to be the only problem with the article. It would sure help me if someone would fill out several red links. --§ Snake311 _{(T + C)} 02:24, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Falun Gong

It is nice that we have an article about Falun Gong. I have tried to simplify its language. I have also added some references. I think it should be extended, to cover more. Like what is it is the group actually practices, and why the Chinese government does not like this. A paragraph could also be added how the treatment of this group by the government is different from the treatment of a different religious community, like Buddhists or Catholics. --Eptalon 09:12, 4 August 2007 (UTC)

All storm articles from the 2005 Atlantic hurricane season

While I've created, expanded, and lightly simplified most of the individual storm articles from the 2005 Atlantic hurricane season, I request some additional editing from other users, helping in to get rid of the red links, referencing and citing articles and sections, and for additional simplifying if still need to be done. While most of the info for those articles are basically copied off from en, I did my best to simplify its context (although it wasn't much of a good job). --§ Snake311 _{(T + C)} 12:39, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Elephants Dream

I think this article is good. Some small parts might need some simplifying, but there's no dreaded "yous," no red links, it's not only one letter long, but still, do take a look at it. Panda Bear 18:57, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Calvin and Hobbes

I copied most of this text months ago from the en wiki, and done some simplifying, but overall this article looks out of shape and needs some major peer reviewing as well as simplifying. Would really appreciate it if someone would help. --§ Alastor Moody _{(T + C)} 16:56, 23 June 2007 (UTC)

Egyptian mythology

I copy-pasted this article from en wikipedia. It really needs work, and I can't do all of it by myself. --Isis§^(talk) 16:48, June 17, 2007

Time signature

Solid article, and I want to eventually get it to VGA status. Cheers, ( ar ky ) 17:09, 8 October 2007 (UTC)

Bloemfontein

I created the article a few months back, seems like it's OK, and I need some feedback. Thanks! Maxim_{(talk) (contributions)} 01:12, 9 October 2007 (UTC)

I expanded the history section to cover pre-capital times somewhat, added to the infobox, and tossed in a section on the economy. Overall, the article is one of the better ones dealing with African capital cities. -- Creol(talk) 05:15, 9 October 2007 (UTC)